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Reaching WIP...

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A WIP for an art trade. I liked the sketch. I don't normally detail sketches this much so I wanted to upload it. XP 
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Hey,
This grabbed my attention straight away. I love the trick of perspective and the detailing on the face. She looks so gentle, and this is probably down to the find grading of the fur on the face and neck.
For human proportions you could lower the breasts a little so they begin under the armpit and add a little more curvature by expanding them (slightly) outside of her chest<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> You could further add curvature by highlighting the rib cage or suggesting hips by widening your lines at the bottom of the image.
Not sure if this was intentional but her claws seem to bend in the wrong direction too on the middle three fingers.

I'm sure in a couple of years you'll revisit this and it will be epic!
*New Watcher*